A za is a group of friends who write renku together. Renku is a Japanese chain-linked poem.

8.30.2006

17. [h]

in the nursing home
an old man coughs and splutters ...
then finally croaks

1 Comments:

Blogger haiku-shelf said...

brilliant the link and shift of the verses 15 to 17!

frog/pond (15)

frog in the throat(16)

and then at in a nursing home "an old men...finally croaks"


well done!

12:06 am

 

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